SUN
Glowing,glowing, red hot sun,
Shining light on everyone.
Earth goes round you once a year,
You're a star with atmosphere!
Glowing,shining,big-hot sun,
You shuold be my number one.
BY SALU
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7 comments:
I like your poem its nice.
you have a spelling mistake and ask yourself, in my writing does "your" make sense or should it be "you're" and whats the difference between the two? (:
hahaha...you have a spelling mistake!!! ...and i dont!!!
...i think?!
...but nice poem, its interesting & its beat stays the same...i think!
and the picture looks nice...with the ocean, trees on the edge of the mountain, and the color...really beautiful!!! :)
Hi Salu it's me Folau. I like your poem but there are spelling mistakes lol, nah algudz take care k!!!
Hi Salu cn u cmment on mah pge lol
salu u got a cool page
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